Something was going wrong. There was no reason why I have to be in this dark, horrid room alone. Now I guessed that someone must have kidnapped me and erased my all memories. Suddenly, I realized that I'm not the only person in this room. There is someone else in this room!
"Hey, who's there?" I shouted
There was no reply, but I could notice that something is moving very fast. Was it a man or monster? Was it a living thing?
"Hey, if you're a human being, please tell me who you are. Can you explain why I am here?"
There was still no answer. I cautiously moved forward with my arms stretched. Still I couldn't see anything. I touched the wall and at that moment, I could feel some liquid was flowing on the wall.
"B.... blood....?"
What was going on? I screamed and yelled out, but nobody seemed to listen my voices. I was alone. I fainted. I fell asleep from unexpected exhaustion and unknown fear.
When I woke up, I found myself being tied near the huge stone column. I was surrounded by hundreds of candles blazing brightly. Under my chair, there were thousands of mice - hungry mice - waiting for delicious dinner.
"Hey,....Help!!!!! Can't you hear me? Isn't there anyone?"
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"Last week, I gave you homework to write thrilling fairy tales, right?" said Mr. Yoon
"Yes, sir" we said.
"You submitted your pieces via e-mail and I read them all already. And I think most of you did a quite good job" said him
"However," he continued, "Seung chan, what did you write about?"
"Well, I wrote about the story about person who is trying to escape from a dark, horrid room"
"Oh, that was terrible. I was so disappointed with your piece. Your story sucks. It was so null and dumb. Rewrite your essay by tomorrow!"
Great story - reminds me of Cube or Buried. I also like the image of being tied to a chair with thousands of rats waiting to eat you from the toes up.
답글삭제Mr. Yoon using the word "sucks" - highly unlikely but funny all the same.
As I just said to you, make sure you read the prompt and follow instructions. An essay from chain writing should be used and mixed in. You could easily use the one below as something else to show Mr. Yoon. He definitely would say that essays "sucks." :) Anyways, I was looking for creative writing and you've at least done that. Good.